Good drawing, the expression is nice You should try to variate skintones though. Some more contrast on the clothes would be nice You've not cleaned the bg everywhere : I can see some lighter parts on it on my monitor.
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Thanks for crit. I've noticed that some of my scanned in works have blatant errors on different monitors. That's annoying! Thank you.

I find myself agreeing with Diane again.

It is one thing to be photorealistic, and another to be artistic.

play around with colors and dont be afraid to be daring.

you have the skills, I can see from your painting; just free your self.

responding to it criticizes of arthony. we can defend it its idea or its tecnica but when haceptar that element is algun that not him affability to brant. showing towards where it directs its work, hoping that mustre that we cannot give pure aalagos so that single being mistaken is learned